14 Comments

  1. Samantha J Bryant
    November 1, 2018 @ 21:35

    Great work. This has potential to be something bigger and even better. I hope you keep working with it. @mirymom1 from
    Balancing Act

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    • admin2
      November 5, 2018 @ 19:40

      Thank you. Yes, I do plan to.

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  2. Bill
    October 31, 2018 @ 19:40

    Enjoyed, and I expect more from this story!

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 13:58

      Thank you. Working on doing that, stay tuned.

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  3. Katharina Gerlach
    October 31, 2018 @ 15:39

    Great story with a few bumps (tense shifts and one clarity issue (when he finds his sister’s tombstone it sounds as if she’s a neighbor or some such) that need resolving). It should be the beginning of something much, much longer (and I can’t wait to read it).

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 13:59

      Thanks. I did not have time before we went live to get a second pair on of eyes on it. I keep seeing stuff myself. Thank you for the input. I needed it. I have plans for something bigger in the works.

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  4. Gina Fabio
    October 31, 2018 @ 15:07

    Intriguing. 😀

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 13:59

      Thank you.

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  5. JQ Rose
    October 31, 2018 @ 13:48

    Hey I like the description of Death–pretty sexy, I’d say. Your world descriptions are outstanding. I can tell you enjoy making up this fantastic story. Well done!
    JQ Rose

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 14:01

      Wow, thank you so much. HUGS! Yeah, I kinda saw him as sexy. I have a few ideas about what more to do with this. I think I finally hit on something I have been trying to do with another project that is giving me fits. I did. I had a blast. I am glad that fun translated over.

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  6. Vanessa
    October 31, 2018 @ 00:59

    I really enjoyed this one! Nothing like Death finding his Reaper.

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 14:01

      Thank you, Vanessa. Yeah, Death does need his Reaper.

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  7. Elizabeth
    October 31, 2018 @ 00:37

    This was fun. Nicely done.

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    • admin2
      November 1, 2018 @ 14:02

      That makes me happy. I am so glad that came through because I had fun. Thank you.

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