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  1. Justine
    November 9, 2018 @ 17:01

    Lovely story, Juneta! The idea of immortality as a punishment is cool.
    One issue I have with the story is that I thought after you talked about Mira leaving, it was a flashback. Then I was highly confused and had to reread it to figure out what was going on. Perhaps if you put in a word like ‘now’, it would be clearer?
    And Thankyou for linking to my 2016 story 🙂

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    • admin2
      November 9, 2018 @ 17:26

      Thank you. You’re welcome. I took your suggested and added Now. I hope that made it clearer.

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