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  1. Katharina Gerlach
    December 10, 2020 @ 03:53

    I like this story a lot. It has great potential and would do nicely as a novella. You might want to add some more description to it though. Most of the events happen in a foggy limbo right now.

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  2. #Halloween #free #fiction Storytime Bloghop 2020 - Katharina Gerlach's English Site
    December 10, 2020 @ 03:51

    […] Immortality by Juneta Key Unwelcomed Visitors by Bill Bush Unraveled by Bonnie Burns Holiday Guest by Sabrina Rosen Home by Barbara Lund Missing Parts by Jemma Weir A Perfect Match by V. S. Stark The Glistening Bat by Karen Lynn II-The Priestess by Raven O’Fiernan The Old Ways by Nic Steven Halloween Pest by Elizabeth McCleary Tales From the Pumpkin Patch by Marilyn Flower […]

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  3. The Old Ways – Nic Steven Writer
    November 9, 2020 @ 15:15

    […] Immortality by Juneta Key […]

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  4. Bill Bush
    November 8, 2020 @ 15:47

    This story screams for more. Good job!

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  5. October 2020 Storytime Blog Hop |
    November 8, 2020 @ 15:41

    […] The Witch at the End of the Road by Katharina GerlachUnraveled by Bonnie BurnsHoliday Guest by Sabrina RosenHome by Barbara LundMissing Parts by Jemma WeirA Perfect Match by V. S. StarkThe Glistening Bat by Karen LynnII-The Priestess by Raven O’FiernanThe Old Ways by Nic StevenHalloween Pest by Elizabeth McClearyTales From the Pumpkin Patch by Marilyn FlowerImmortality by Juneta Key […]

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  6. Bonnie
    November 1, 2020 @ 07:21

    Fingers crossed! I want more!

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  7. Karen Lynn
    October 31, 2020 @ 16:54

    It would be interesting to have enough time to really understand the value of your own life, wouldn’t it? So many of us underestimate ourselves!

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  8. Tales From The Pumpkin Patch - Juneta Key
    October 31, 2020 @ 14:47

    […] Immortality by Juneta Key […]

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  9. Halloween Pest–Blog Hop October 2020 — Elizabeth McCleary
    October 31, 2020 @ 10:36

    […] Immortality by Juneta Key […]

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  10. Justine
    November 9, 2018 @ 17:01

    Lovely story, Juneta! The idea of immortality as a punishment is cool.
    One issue I have with the story is that I thought after you talked about Mira leaving, it was a flashback. Then I was highly confused and had to reread it to figure out what was going on. Perhaps if you put in a word like ‘now’, it would be clearer?
    And Thankyou for linking to my 2016 story 🙂

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    • admin2
      November 9, 2018 @ 17:26

      Thank you. You’re welcome. I took your suggested and added Now. I hope that made it clearer.

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