12 Comments

  1. Renee
    November 4, 2017 @ 3:30 pm

    Wow! That gave me chills. I love stories like that.

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  2. Kami Bataya
    October 31, 2017 @ 6:19 pm

    Oh no! D: I did not see that coming. Poor Jazz.

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  3. Jacqui Murray
    October 27, 2017 @ 10:41 am

    Well this definitely puts me in the mood for Halloween!

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  4. Chris Makowski
    October 26, 2017 @ 9:35 am

    That was creepy delicious!

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  5. Reprobate Typewriter
    October 26, 2017 @ 3:02 am

    I love this story, Juneta! Definitely one of the best of the hop.

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  6. Bill Bush
    October 25, 2017 @ 7:24 pm

    Nicely done! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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  7. pumpkinprincess
    October 25, 2017 @ 3:15 pm

    I like the mystery and the twist in the end. You also built a great atmosphere.

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  8. EricaMadeAThing
    October 25, 2017 @ 2:16 pm

    Very nice, definitely didn’t see the end coming.

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  9. Katharina Gerlach
    October 25, 2017 @ 11:06 am

    Great story. And living in the face of death is the hardest thing to do. Very well written. I can’t wait for your novel(s). get them done!

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  10. Loni Townsend
    October 25, 2017 @ 10:07 am

    Gave me goosebumps. Great job!

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  11. J.Q. Rose
    October 25, 2017 @ 9:58 am

    Well-told tale. The ending caught me off guard.
    https://www.junetakey.com/boon-juneta-key-storytime-blog-hop-october-25-2017/

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  12. Elizabeth McCleary
    October 24, 2017 @ 10:22 pm

    Ooh – I like it! Fantastic twist!

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